WANTED: Constructive Criticism. I’m working on some sales material for my coffee company. I’m throwing this concept out there for critique. This page is part of a potential 8-page leave-behind to persuade folks to upgrade the coffee they serve. I’m initially targeting NYC photo studios and post-production houses and I’m trying to take a different approach that doesn’t beat around the bush. (The final page will use my handwriting, not some generic handwriting font and logos, etc are subject to move and change).